1)TENSE:the evidence still suggests the evolution, and thus present-perfect is inappropriate, suggest as modifier to evidence is preferred.
2) the conjunction of two sentences is illogical, and is needed here.
3) PRONOUN: the precedent of its is ambiguous.
4)TENSE: the trunk evolved, but not still evolving today.
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caseyxiao2023-03-26 19:42:24
时态不对
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lydia10542020-12-24 10:22:31
its 指代不清 沒有時間點指出適合使用完成式
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ricardoiii2019-11-03 15:22:49
its指代不清
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Warrina2019-07-23 16:18:44
1.tense :has suggested很奇怪,这个证据依然成立,用一般现在时
2.没有连词,逻辑不通顺
3.the precedent of 'its' is ambiguous.
4.tense:trunk 现在不在evolving了,过去式
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corrine10062019-04-05 17:25:05
1.its trunk 后面不是一个句子。
2. evidence has suggested 时态使用不对。证据显示不存在现在完成时。